Proximity in the year 2000 I were a an match between Universidad de Chile and Colo Colo. in this game U. de Chile won for 2 to 1. I went with my father and we were very happy for the victory.
When the game was finished, we were at the bus stop, and while we waiting for own transport, from a bus fully the Colo Colo‘s fans was launched a stone, it hit me in my Chest and left the respiration about 30 seconds.
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mchacon Dear Salomón, here are my correctiosn: Aproximately...I was in a match... In this game.....while we were waiting for... full of not fully (here you need the adjective not an adverb)...through not launched (you launch a product into the market not things towards people)... chest is with low case = small letter....left me without breathing or without being able to breath for about... I lost the mood for going to the stadium... only have gone there for important....love football....makes families not able to attend the stadium or doesn't allow families to go to the stadium, because fans are too dangerous (you decide which one is a better ending)! Good work! Hope you will be able to see your mistakes and try to understand why you made them. Keep trying! Am positive you'll do better next time!