Story in past

Posted by Francisco On Sunday, October 17, 2010 1 comentarios
The name of this story can be... "One of the worst day in my life"

In 2006... i don't remember the exactly day, but the events ocurred between June and July of this year. I was in university I had a lot of subjects, because I had failed 2 before I was did it.
I'm really stressed, I had sleep a little time in the last nigth...
I was walking to university with my worse face ... this day I had a final exam of a course (i don't remember which too). After the exam I had brougth a final inform report of a work that i had done with 3 classmates.
I was close to the university when I remember the report... I forgot the report on my bed!!!

the solution was very stressful... i decided do the exam in a record time (less than 50% than the original time) and after run to my house and took the report.
I could do... just in time, but when i was running from metro to university I lost my "pase escolar", i think that my "pase" fell from my pocket when i was running.

In the evening I arrived to my house, I took my car and I went to my best friend's house. we was talking when I decided return to my house.
when I walked to my car... I saw that my car was stolen... entire stolen. Was terrible!
We called to police and search around the neigborhood, but i didn't found anything.

fortunately two days after that day... my car appears alone near to my house without radio and a little thing that we had in the bag.

Was a very bad day....

1 comentarios to Story in past

  1. says:

    mchacon Dear Francisco, here are my corrections:
    In the headline, 'is one of the worst days in my life'....in 2006 I don't remember the exact day...the event not events....I had failed 2 before I was did it (what is it that you want to say here?)I was really stressed! not present!... I had slept few hours...I don't remember which not too!..a final report not inform report!... I had left the report on my bed...I (always write this pronoun in capital! Always!)and afterwards....when I was running from the metro to the university (articles)...I realised I had lost my 'pase escolar'...I thought that my 'pase' had fallen from my pocket...we were talking when I decided to return home....I realised my car was stolen, entirely stolen. We called the police... I didn't find it. Fortunately, after two days my car appeared...near my house without the radio...

    Sorry to hear such an awful experience! Good to know you are all right! Please check your mistakes and see if you understand why you made them. If not then we can see them in class!

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