A tipical day begins at 7 o’clock in the morning when I hear the alarm clock and fight against sleep. Before five minutes I am waking up and taking a shower. Before the shower and dress, turn on the TV to see the news while I take the breakfast. When I have finished the breakfast I go out from flat to work.
I go to work by subway, I take it in Santa Lucia station and often get out in Pedro de Valdivia station else Los Leones. The office it’s just at the same distancia from both stations.
For Launch always close to 1 o’clock I go to any restaurant near to the office. Thankfully there are too restaurant to chose one. I am come back to work closet o 2 o’clovk in the afternoon.
At 5.30 hours take my bag and runaway form the work for go to the English Class at the institute.
At 9.30 hours ending clases end and I come back to the flat, when arrive to it, I cooking some light food, preferably a salad. Before this play guitar or watch televisión. Between 12 and 1 y go to bed and the day becomes to the end.
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mchacon Dear Pablo, here are my corrections: After five minutes....I wake up and take a shower (remember that you are describing routine = present simple).....after not before the shower and getting dressed, I turn the tv on...when I finish having breakfast (do not change tenses!)...I leave my flat to go to work.....or los leones station, either station suits me....the office is at the same distance from both stations......I always have lunch close to 13 hrs and go to....there are two restaurants to choose from... I go back to work around 2pm.... at 5:30pm not hours....runaway from work (here you do not need the article the, because you are talking of work as a general concept)....and go to my English lessson or class......I come back to my flat once the class finishes at 9:30pm, cook some light food....after this I .... please revise the prepositions and connectors before and after you mix them up!! you confuse them!!! Good job!!! The main ideas are very clear and you make yourself understood, though you need to improve your structure as well as tenses!!! Keep trying harder and harder!!!!