I decided write about three things...
Firstly: About how I spend my money
I could describe a lot of things, but i think that the most important in this topic is describe my reasons. I spend money in basic things for muy house. I live with my parents yet and I help with many things. But I love spend money with my friends, in travels, enjoing the life!
Last week for example I traveled to San pedro de atacama... was amazing!!!
Second: About my future career ambitions
Tomorrow friday will be my last day in my actual job. I quit my job because i found a better job in the area that i really like. I want learn a lot in this place and in two or three years i'm going to search new oportunities abroad!
And finally i want to thank to all of you. Was a very nice experience!
I hope we can be in touch!
I wish you will have a very good oral exam and increase a lot your mark in the TOEIC
Total.... thanks!
mchacon Dear Francisco, here are my corrections: I have decided to write about..... (do not forget to capitalize pronoun I, always!!!).... is to describe..... I spend moeny on not in!.... I still live with my parents not yet!(that is Spanish).... I love to spend.....to travel... enjoy life not the life.... (days of the week are always capitalized) I want to learn... to search for new opportunities..... thank you all no to!... Good piece of writing!! Please check your mistakes and watch out with your misspellings!! Keep improving!