Yesterday 3 delinquents knocked on the door of the family house, the lady opened it and they violently entered pointing their guns at her and the three girls.
They registered the whole house and fled with a about $2.000.000 on jewels and species.
The lady said that the most traumatic was to see the gun pointing at her 3 years old daughter who was paralyzed by terror. Among them there was a minor who was the most violent of all he was on charge of pointing the kids while the other two looked for things to steal in the house. She said it was a horrible experience and she hopes the police find the robbers soon and they are put under arrest because they are a terror for the city.
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mchacon Dear Claudia, here are my corrections: the door of a family house..... the most traumatic part was....paralyzed in terror.... most violent of them all, he was in charge.... the police finds and put them under arrest because they are a threat! (remember that the city is an it, so they really are a threat to society)
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